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Monday, 18 May 2020

first day of going to school in the class room

Today I went to my class for the first time in Term two and it is very loud. It is very fun and some of  us are signing up for the Kāpiti poem contest. My friend Carys is signing up and my other friend Wendy and other people in my classroom. I am signing up too but I don't know my parent's number and other things etc. We run round the court and do drawings and it is very fun.

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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous21 May 2020 at 09:54

    Hi Misteri
    I like your drawing. Its very creative.I remember when I youst to do poems.Try adding a bit more information.


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  2. Anonymous21 May 2020 at 09:57

    Kia ora Misteri,
    It’s me Carys. I really like your writing that you did. I really hope that you are going to keep on blogging because you are doing really great.
    Next time for the title remember to put a capital at the start of a sentence or title.

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  3. Anonymous21 May 2020 at 10:26

    Hi Misteri, it’s me Lilley d you’re spelling is really good as well as the capital letters! Instead of saying today maybe explain the date of the day. You could have explained the Kāpiti poem contest a bit better to make it a bit more less complected other than that its really good!

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